NTUB 台北商業大學
期中報告_老師評分檔案
Group6
Group 1: General Evaluation
The group demonstrates a persuasive report with correct grammar. Yet the wording in your writing seems to be very unclear, please find the proper word. It’s pity that the group does not cite any resources.
Your writing is well-structured and the group demonstrates a good command of English speaking ability. The notes are well supported to the report. There is impressive visual effects to make the report exciting.
The team spirit is excellent.
Group1
Group2
Group 2: General Evluation
The report is not well-structured, since the description between the Freudian theory and ending of La La Land is rather vague even though the dream theory chart is very impressive. The sentences in the report are all fragmentary.
However, the group has a good command of speaking English that makes the report fluent.
Even one member was absent from the midterm report, the group had shown a great team spirit and ability of improvisation.
Group3
Group 3 Midterm Report Evaluation:
Generally speaking, your grammar skills are needed to be improved. There are a lot of fragmentary sentences and the phrasal usages are placed wrongly. Yet the structure are well prepared and the whole group seem to be working as a great team. Regarding your speaking ability, there are many words pronounced wrongly. Each of the reporters should memorize your lines and speak in a correct way. However, I am impressed by your efforts to revise your report diligently.
Group4
Group 4 Midterm Report Evaluation:
Generally speaking, your grammar skills are needed to be improved. There are a lot of fragmentary sentences and the phrasal usages are placed wrongly.
The whole structure is logical, especially the “Meaning of Seasons Chart” yet the group misses to place the question.
The whole group seems not to be worked as a team yet their effort to cite the primary screenplay resource is impressive and fluent.
Group 5 Midterm Report Evaluation:
The group's writing is based on the right grammatical writing yet the wording in your writing seems to be very unclear, please find the proper words.
This is a well-structured essay. You’ve done a great work by extensive readings of various materials. I am really impressed by your effort.
The whole group works as a great team.
Group5
Group6
Group 6 Midterm Report Evaluation:
The group's grammar skills are needed to be improved. There are a lot of fragmentary sentences and tense usages are confused.
There is a very detailed body on "Features of Seasons" but very vague in “Links Between Seasons.”
The whole group works as a team and the speaking ability is quite impressive.
Group7
Group 7: General Evaluation
The group’s writing is based on the fragmentary topic sentences yet the basic statements are not detailed enough to support your major argument. The Chinese speaking ability is fluent and eloquent but less English explanation aided. All in all, the group displays team spirit strongly.
Group8
Group 8: General Evaluation
This is a logical report yet without a title. You’ve done a great work by extensive readings of various materials. Yet your synopsis is needed to be noted with a resource otherwise it would be considered plagiarism.
Your writing is based on the right grammatical rules but you need to pay attention to the usage of plurality. The whole group has a good command of English speaking and team spirit.
Group9
Group 9: General Evaluation
This is a structured report. You’ve done a great work by extensive readings of various films. I am really impressed by your efforts. The grammar skills are needed to be improved since there are many basic grammatical mistakes.
Even though there is no title (maybe it could be "La La Land and Intertextuality") in your report, this is a very ambitious report.
